Yes, I can see it's written right to left. What threw me for a moment was that you have broken tshdar into tsh dar, but as soon as I realized that then I could see the correspondence between Voynichese and your Hebrew-character translation.
This yields something like "Mountaineer preserves, mountaineer sweeps, rest beauty sweeps, weaver beauty, rest destroyed, rest Lord bow down, seed my own firepot, rest to plant, chief, seed life of, thorn bush to be covered, of fair of be[ing] constrained, little brother, thorn bush gird up, thorn bush strength, I seek refuge, companion thorn bush brother..."
This yields something like "Mountaineer preserves, mountaineer sweeps, rest beauty sweeps, weaver beauty, rest destroyed, rest Lord bow down, seed my own firepot, rest to plant, chief, seed life of, thorn bush to be covered, of fair of be[ing] constrained, little brother, thorn bush gird up, thorn bush strength, I seek refuge, companion thorn bush brother..."