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But on the other hand if someone doesn't get that EVA is just a working transcription and not the way the author meant to pronounce these words (maybe he didn't pronounce them at all) then such man is a dead duck anyway who wouldn't have much success with VM.

The "dead duck" is often an AI. Looking for words that "sort of" look like their EVA transliteration is typical of AI "solutions". I'm not saying it's necessarily an AI, but it often is.

For example:
shedy > skaidan / skēd (Germanic root: to speak)
kai > kaido / kaijan (Baltic: keeper/guardian)
chol >chwal / sol (Slavic/Hebrew: soul)