If this was written by teenagers, then the layout and presentation is good. The logic and research needs a lot of work. And Downing should have steered them away from Cheshire.
If you start with bad research, a bad foundation, it's hard to build anything solid out of it. It's like trying to sculpt wood out of ashes.
If you start with bad research, a bad foundation, it's hard to build anything solid out of it. It's like trying to sculpt wood out of ashes.

