The reason that I asked about otol and odaiin is that they are the two most frequent "Voynich stars" (members of the labeled sets of f68r1 and f68r2). For this reason, they at least shoud be expected to be of the same rank, while in your translation one is noun, the other is verb, let alone that there does not seem to be anything in both "spouse" and "perish" which would make them members of a homogenous set.
Your translation of aror could make sense in the context of the last line of f116v, but without the suggested translation of sheey it is hard to decide upon that.
What I mean by "coherent" is:
1) All words in a sentence are translated into the supposed underlay language (i.e. Latin if you claim Latin). No dubious positions remain.
2) Grammar of the underlay language is respected.
3) The translated text is relevant to the context of the page (other translated text in the same page and also imagery).
Your translation of aror could make sense in the context of the last line of f116v, but without the suggested translation of sheey it is hard to decide upon that.
What I mean by "coherent" is:
1) All words in a sentence are translated into the supposed underlay language (i.e. Latin if you claim Latin). No dubious positions remain.
2) Grammar of the underlay language is respected.
3) The translated text is relevant to the context of the page (other translated text in the same page and also imagery).