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[Witch Mountain]

Thankyou Witch Mountain,

Number 1 you have to make some sense out of the whole VMS paragraph and develop a rhythm and correlation to its overall meaning.

Thank you dear Stellar - do you think you developed a comprehensive meaning? It seems that your paragraphs (particularly the last one) are vague and have to stretch a little to create meaning. For example your sentence "Gods Kingdom come and see flames as a betrayal by Solar Chief God made by fire I am he." Doesn't that sound like you are reaching? Why isn't it just "I will set God's kingdom into flames"?

Dear Stellar I am sure you have a wonderful answer!