Lament from the Sea, New Method! f2r

[bunny]

Offered up English wording of applying added step to Stellar's translation.  The full explanation will take longer to type and will be done later.


Presently concealed.

His concealment refutes understanding according to our knowledge.  I see (He) Saturn truly does indeed really
conceal his disc, changing the conditions in the divine allotted order, or perhaps devouring his offspring and then proceeding to renew again. 
Considered unlucky.

Bunny

Decided not to post results as found but to rework with same information into a more acceptable Latin grammar form.  I'm not the person to do this so it will be far from perfect but feel necessary to see how far it can conform to the required sensible translation required.  It will not change the meaning and is not necessary to understand the meaning, but may be a more acceptable way to present.

Bunny