24-03-2019, 10:03 PM
(24-03-2019, 07:22 PM)Linda wrote: You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login to view.[You currently have recipes in quotes once, italicized twice. Again, i would advise they all be replaced by the term quire 20 (i think anyone who knows the vms enough to be comparing theories will know what a quire is), or else use terminology like the last section, or pages You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login to view. to f116z, and remove the references to cooking, etc.
As it is, it either does look like you are saying they are recipes, or it looks like you are being sarcastic about it, either way, it detracts from the presentation of your theory.
I agree that the text section and stars section are more ambiguous, that is why i like the term quire 20. A quick search on the internet would help anyone that didnt know what it meant. The reference to deep text could also be confusing, but would be preferable to the current wording.
It would be foolish of me to ignore good advice. I will change it to quire 20 shortly. Thanks again, Morten.