16-07-2018, 02:52 PM
Sorry, I veered OT in my above post without addressing the main issue.
I agree with MarcoP 's proposed wording above.
Regarding the other statement, I would suggest something like simply: "the two fish are not connected by a line" . Or JKP' s version.
I agree with MarcoP 's proposed wording above.
Regarding the other statement, I would suggest something like simply: "the two fish are not connected by a line" . Or JKP' s version.

