10-12-2021, 02:07 PM
(05-05-2020, 09:41 PM)Anton wrote: You are not allowed to view links. Register or Login to view.f105r is a good example of multipass, especially the third paragraph which is a desperate mess!
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One other oddity about that third paragraph is that the last (or at least "lowest") line ends with a gallows. I seem to recall that I couldn't find any other paragraph that ends that way, which suggests that paragraph-final gallows shouldn't typically be expected to occur and might even violate some structural rule. (Of course, they're rare enough even at the ends of lines.) That led me to wonder whether the "real" conclusion to the paragraph might have been added in above it -- implying in turn that there had been insufficient space left for it at the bottom, which would have been the case if the first line of the following paragraph had already been written.

